Was hoping Elmer would've had his boy p*ssy fudged -- still good content. Gave me the good ol' LMAO.

Solid animation! It feels like the beginning of something. You should make a series out of this and explore the characters more. Great start.

Very organic jiggle!

Cute short game. I could see it work with more of the laid back comic book narration.

Old school vibe with a modern mix. I didn't feel the synth at 1:30 was drowned out, however it is conflicting with the arps in my ear; might need some frequency cutting. This makes it slightly grating on the mix side. I do feel that the melody isn't in the forefront, and it's fighting for the limelight. So there's a problem somewhere in there.

I don't have any qualms with the composition of the song. It's uplifting and energetic. It has more of a video gamey feel to me -- like the start of something. The bass has a phat tone that bites, what synth is that? :D

Hard to completely review a song that isn't complete, but I'll review with my impressions so far :)

It has an interesting build up; sort of a spacey ethnic vibe. This is more of a video gamey feel than a "radio listen". When it finally kicks in at 46 seconds I think the toms could use more punch. Not sure if it's the EQing or the samples you used? I think another element that could pull the listener in to the new section are some pads or added instruments. My ears feel that section has a lot of unused space.

In its current state it leaves me wanting to hear more which is a good start. Overall it's going in the right direction, but i'll need to hear more. I'll have to listen to the finished product. Keep at it!

Sorry for the ignorance, because I know very little about LBP XD Are the samples from the game? If so, you may want to check the licensing for that.

The remix has an ethnic vibe which suits this melody. I checked the YouTube version for the whole "performance" and it's good. The instruments have a retro quality to them. Like the glorious days of early GM patches; used tastefully of course. I think this lends itself well the atmosphere of game music. I feel like I'm on the SNES, ha ha. You're catering to this nostalgia, right? However this sound serves a special niche and it doesn't go far away from that. Keep doing what you're doing as it is good for what it is :)

I reviewed this on the basis of the music and not your project. Best wishes and good luck.